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Post by SamuraiMarmoset on Feb 19, 2004 1:16:13 GMT -5
I have just succeeded in releasing a chapiter for Sylvina. I've neglected her too badly lately. I had a rush for ideas for her story today, and God willing, I'll be able to do them here. Man, though, it's gonna be a dark little piece of work. I thought -Kurtis- was my abuse character. ^_~
Anyway, feedback would be appreciated (I've been good for it recently, yeah?
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Geronimo
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Psychic Psycho
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Post by Geronimo on Feb 23, 2004 13:35:05 GMT -5
Well, I finally got a moment (in class, yes, I'm a bad boy) to read the chapter. It was a nice one of those "transition" chapters... well, not so much a transition as things getting set in motion for later on. Sylvina is one disturbed mofo. She's had quite a turnaround. Her characterization, however, has -shades- of "too much, too soon," but it's not entirely unbelievable. I can see her flipping out after what happened. I see Violet's in this chappy. She seems pretty much in character, so that's good. But ...what? You no like her original last name? ^_~ Let's seeee...what else? Well, I'd hate to have Talfir as MY grandpa. Even if I became an insane mass murderer/necromancer. Good job, Samu. Keep it up. ---Gero
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