Zee Moment! [Version R.16]

[Geronimo]

Welcome to the Ronnie Bell equivalent of what was Fitcher 10. If it's even half as well received, I can consider it a job well done. XD

Ronnie 16 is out. In fact, here it is. Have it, it's free:
www.geocities.com/geronimo_nedokius/ronnie16.html

I'm really excited about this one, but like I said in the email, I won't bore you with the million things I could say about it. ^_^

About feedback: PLEASE DO, YES, THANKEE. For the benefit of other readers, it'd be nice if MB-feedback (which is the way I like it, baybee) is relatively spoiler-free, but if you wanna go all out, find me on ICQ sometime, I'd love to hear your comments. ^_^

ENJOY-U. XD

---Geronimo

[SamuraiMarmoset]

I apologize about the lateness of it all, my bad.

Anyway, it was cool to finally see the resolution to the first Ronnie arc, and all the loose ends were tied up nicely. Mercurius de Valognes was a cool concept, and I'm glad to see I wasn't -too- far off the mark about Tristan. The ending, BTW, was very touching, and very sad.

All in all, a great chapiter, and I look forward to seeing more. ^_^

[Masamune]

Excellent chapter as usual, it took me a moment to get back in the Ronni-verse but I managed. Wow, lots things culminated in this chapter, making it... well awesome.

Maroux's real identity was a cool twist, but understandably won't be seen again.

Mercerius was cool too, as Samu said. Wonder how a Grasslander ends up in power like that?

Kranach had an interesting end. If he's not dead yet, I hope we get to find out a few tidbits on his older life beforehand. Sort of a shame I went and killed Klift now, I woulda liked to known his background too.

Now for... the criticism! *flashing neon sign*

Nikki seemed out of place for the chapter, sort of in a 'Oh. I'm here too' kind of way. She really didn't interact with Ronnie's group and seemed somewhat pointless.

Pauline's little story branch to save the others seemed equally out of place. The culmination of it for the cheap laughs "Got Boobs?" seemed to mess up the flow of the story and in the end, did not succeed in getting the humor quality it was going for.

Overall, great chapter. Now get the next one out, fool.