Senor, the bandits, they are attacking the VEELage

[SamuraiMarmoset]

I have just succeeded in releasing a chapiter for Sylvina. I've neglected her too badly lately. I had a rush for ideas for her story today, and God willing, I'll be able to do them here. Man, though, it's gonna be a dark little piece of work. I thought -Kurtis- was my abuse character. ^_~

Anyway, feedback would be appreciated (I've been good for it recently, yeah?

[Geronimo]

Well, I finally got a moment (in class, yes, I'm a bad boy) to read the chapter.

It was a nice one of those "transition" chapters... well, not so much a transition as things getting set in motion for later on.

Sylvina is one disturbed mofo. She's had quite a turnaround. Her characterization, however, has -shades- of "too much, too soon," but it's not entirely unbelievable. I can see her flipping out after what happened.

I see Violet's in this chappy. She seems pretty much in character, so that's good. But ...what? You no like her original last name? ^_~

Let's seeee...what else? Well, I'd hate to have Talfir as MY grandpa. Even if I became an insane mass murderer/necromancer.

Good job, Samu. Keep it up.

---Gero