Geronimo
New Recruit
Psychic Psycho
Posts: 43
|
Post by Geronimo on Oct 18, 2004 23:25:26 GMT -5
It's a travesty, but I couldn't think of any other subject line for this. ^_~ Anyway, this is here to tell ya that Sarah 4 is out! Check your email, or just click belooow: www.geocities.com/geronimo_nedokius/sarah4.htmlPlease enjoy, and please feedback! ^_^ ---Gero |
|
Masamune
New Recruit
Floating Sword
Posts: 42
|
Post by Masamune on Oct 19, 2004 0:02:00 GMT -5
First off, update your avatar.
Interesting chapter overall. Sarah has a lot to deal with, Crowley even more so. The tie-in with Langrey and Donnie was interesting too. I guess we'll be seeing plenty of them in the future.
And why did you have to remind me of Arrow? That makes me cry, he was just awesome. Now I gotta go kill Windy or something, except I can't cuz the Suikoden 1 ending sucks. Ah well... Some critiquing time.
It moved a little too slow for my tastes. But considering the nature of the chapter (especially after the one it followed), that was to be expected. Hopefully it will pick up in the next chapter. And I'm glad you're finally getting *coughcoughsputtercough* in. That pleases me greatly.
|
|
|
|
Post by SamuraiMarmoset on Oct 19, 2004 21:38:30 GMT -5
Sarah's got a lot of potential, and it looks like you're going to be making full effectiveness of it. The chapiter and the one preceeding it was good set-up, and I have a feeling the real story is about to begin. A story with little green aliens and fantastic powers. And the science, oh, the science!
...ANYWAY, my suggestion is to start looking for Mazus in the Tinto Caves. Maybe Abizboah's got a statue fungus garden in there. ^_^
And the title of this message can't beat the title of that oh-so-famous Ridley chapiter 'I Can't Think of a Good Title'. XDDDD
|
|
